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Submitted: May 10, 2009
Image Size: 538 KB
Resolution: 534×800

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed:1 second
Aperture:F/14.0
Focal Length:18 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:May 6, 2009, 5:16:07 PM

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Photography / Animals, Plants & Nature / Waterscapes

Berlin Kreuzberg, Germany

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Canon EOS 400D + EF-S 18-55mm // Cullmann Alpha 2500 + Hoya NDx8 + KT-RC-1

Critique by ~XforeverlostX Jan 7, 2010, 4:08:16 AM

You have got great composition in this photograph and the detail in the photograph is spectacular. Not arranging it so that the waterfall is in the middle makes the image far more interesting and eye catching.
I do think that the trees at the top of the image don't quite fit in, especially the flowering tree so cropping it at the top of the falls would be an idea. The falls themselves are very earthy colours and the colourful tree at the top just looks out of place compared to the rest of the image.
Overall though i think that the images is very good and the way the water is misty instead of flowing gives it a very unique look.
Well done and keep up the good work.

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Critique by ~PaulGana May 13, 2009, 7:52:10 AM

Let's start with the obvious. That sky really hurts the photo, I would have eliminated it entirely, cropping down to the top of the falls, I know you would lose those nice trees, especially that flowering tree in the upper left, but that sky really overwhelms them from the get go. I also can see this in a square cropping. Crop it from the top of the falls down to where that rock in the water is, that would be one suggestion. One other thing I really feel needed correcting is panning the camera over more to the left, there is far too much of the rocks on the right side, plus it would eliminate that rock on the lower right, which doesn't really do anything for me. I know judging by some of the photos linked on your description you couldn't move to the left, put I would have panned the camera to the left a small amount.

You got a good exposure on the water, nothing looks hot there, but you did sacrifice some detail on shadows on the left side. It does look a little dark.

You usually have some really nice work, but this one just really doesn't strike me that much. Nice attempt though, you have shown some dedication with this shot, with all your rock crawling