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:iconpaulgana:
I had to spend the time to really look at this photo.

we will start off with the obvious, this is a very common type of photo, not much is original about this one. What really saves this photo from all the others is the surface that the flower and water is laying on. I really like that surface.

I also really like that small puddle on the lower left of the flower, that is really nice, it definitely adds to the droplets.

The focus is good, though the pedal on the left is a little soft and the stamen (if that is what they are called) in the center part of the flower on it's right is a little soft too. The DOF is nice too, I like how the very front is soft in focus with the back soft as well, keeping the focus strictly on the flower.

The lighting is fabulous as well as the color

This is a very common photo, perhaps overdone, but they can still be very elegant, and you pulled that off
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:iconapache1322:
This is a beautiful shot from you as usual. The sharp focus in the foreground to the soft focus in the background is beautiful The color of the flower combined with the water drop placement and the reflection is amazing. You did a great job at capturing the texture of the flower pedals. Viewers can almost feel the velvety texture of them along with the coldness of the water and surface that they're on. I have seen countless shots of flowers and water drops but this is by far one of the best ones. Keep it up..I would absolutely love to see more pieces like this.
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:iconfetalman:
nice one

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:iconrav777:
I really like the image quality, dept of field and focus of this shot , as well as the colour contrast due to the black underground.

I just don't think that this can still be called nature photography since the scenery is completely arranged, thus this should perhaps go to still life.

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sehr geiles Bild , perfekt im Fokus. :)

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:iconpuchaez:
Great picture. I love it... this one more than the first one ;-)
:icondontwannabemyself:
Looks awesome:aww:

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:iconrealdesperation:
delicate, soft and romantic...
Mysterious
:iconsneakyone1990:
Wow, great details :)

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:iconcreophulus:
einfach gut , es toll aber man hätte die blüte evtl noch bissl heller machen können aber denk mal , das auch geschmacksache great(:
:iconpom-pom-pom:
Amazing sharpness!

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:iconlayit:
Very nice shot!^^

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Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
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Apr 10, 2009, 3:26:45 PM

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